I’ll write a letter of opinion based on this news :
Dear Editor,
I was interested to read “Headlines Cyber bullying claims life in
Medan” by Apriadi Gunawan (Sat, April 09th 2016). I am writing
to express my concern about the bullying that addressed to Sonya Ekarina
Sembiring Depari, a senior high school student in Medan, who was harshly being
bullied by netizens for threatening a traffic policewoman by claiming to be the
daughter of a general.
Sonya’s attitude was not really good. However, the bullying from
the netizen may be able to cause bad effect to Sonya and family. As far as we
know that Sonya’s father was passed away after watching the news about what Sonya did.
My suggestion is it is better for the netizen to stop bullying.
The netizen should give the smart and wise advice. For example we can send
private letter to sonya, send about good motivation. By doing that Sonya and
her family will not feel embarrassed and depressed.
Atmi
Yogyakarta
I think you should add a comma after 'For example' and 'By doing that'.
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